When the eyes speak!

satya · 8th June 2006

Shot on my trip to India. Feel free to comment... thanks in advance

ronnie_sjr · 8th June 2006

Nice expressive eyes

But Im quite uncomfortable with the composition. Maybe you should frame it in such a way as to bring the focus more to the eyes. For now its almost the whole face.

Also, I dunno if its just me, but the messy bunch of hairs at the back of his head is rather distracting..

Cheers,
Ronnie

Moonstone · 8th June 2006

Yes, the eyes look impressive, but the white is very distracting. It will be good that to remove the white on the top, left and bottom of the image.

Stoned · 8th June 2006

I agree with moonstone. The composition is ok for me but I would rather view this as a panoramic image.

Cecil · 8th June 2006

Like the rugged look of the face and piercing eyes.

satya · 8th June 2006

better?

nottipiglet · 8th June 2006

I think the window panes were a natural frame, producing a panoramic image. I don't think you needed to crop them off.

Personally, I think you should lose the thick black frame you created. Just a simple think line frame will do... and then you can keep the window panes as a natural frame.

btw, I love the expression and those eyes.

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satya Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 52	When the eyes speak! Shot on my trip to India. Feel free to comment... thanks in advance

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ronnie_sjr Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: singapore Posts: 173	Re: When the eyes speak! Nice expressive eyes But Im quite uncomfortable with the composition. Maybe you should frame it in such a way as to bring the focus more to the eyes. For now its almost the whole face. Also, I dunno if its just me, but the messy bunch of hairs at the back of his head is rather distracting.. Cheers, Ronnie

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Moonstone Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Woodlands Posts: 464	Re: When the eyes speak! Yes, the eyes look impressive, but the white is very distracting. It will be good that to remove the white on the top, left and bottom of the image. Last edited by Moonstone; 8th June 2006 at 09:13 AM.

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Stoned Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Changi Posts: 4,376	Re: When the eyes speak! I agree with moonstone. The composition is ok for me but I would rather view this as a panoramic image. __________________ My Personal Folio (of random events and things)

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Cecil Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Eunos Posts: 449	Re: When the eyes speak! Like the rugged look of the face and piercing eyes.

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satya Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 52	Re: When the eyes speak! better? Last edited by satya; 8th June 2006 at 11:57 AM.

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nottipiglet Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 741	Re: When the eyes speak! I think the window panes were a natural frame, producing a panoramic image. I don't think you needed to crop them off. Personally, I think you should lose the thick black frame you created. Just a simple think line frame will do... and then you can keep the window panes as a natural frame. btw, I love the expression and those eyes.