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    Default When the eyes speak!

    Shot on my trip to India. Feel free to comment... thanks in advance

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    Nice expressive eyes

    But Im quite uncomfortable with the composition. Maybe you should frame it in such a way as to bring the focus more to the eyes. For now its almost the whole face.

    Also, I dunno if its just me, but the messy bunch of hairs at the back of his head is rather distracting..


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    Yes, the eyes look impressive, but the white is very distracting. It will be good that to remove the white on the top, left and bottom of the image.
    Last edited by Moonstone; 8th June 2006 at 09:13 AM.

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    I agree with moonstone. The composition is ok for me but I would rather view this as a panoramic image.
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    Like the rugged look of the face and piercing eyes.

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    Last edited by satya; 8th June 2006 at 11:57 AM.

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    I think the window panes were a natural frame, producing a panoramic image. I don't think you needed to crop them off.

    Personally, I think you should lose the thick black frame you created. Just a simple think line frame will do... and then you can keep the window panes as a natural frame.

    btw, I love the expression and those eyes.


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