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Old 6th June 2006   #1
amsyari
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Old 6th June 2006   #2
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i like the contrast but is seemed too centralised. may wanna try out diff compositions. =)
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Old 6th June 2006   #3
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This is a in-your-face composition: over sat reds and centred! meant to shock, disturb, irritate, unsettle, etc, and it works. :-)
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Old 6th June 2006   #4
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unfortunately the shot falls short of a really interesting subject to fit the title, would prefer more obvious hint of some kind of an important letter than peeking at some green colour pamphlet ... advice: look for some other mailboxes
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Old 6th June 2006   #5
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i do like the sat colours, but subject matter doesn't do any shocking. fairly plain, doesn't say anything.
if you have more of these kind of pictures then they benefit in a series, do remember that a series is only as strong as its weakest pic.

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