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Old 6th June 2006   #1
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Default Morning Sky

Hi, shot this this morning. Was playing around with curves and achieved this by chance.
Appreciate comments.

Thanks.
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Old 6th June 2006   #2
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IS Morning Sky the theme? The sky can't really tell the story.
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Old 6th June 2006   #3
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Well, just decided to post it. Didn't know what title to put.
Besides the title?
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The clouds reddish and the leaves on the bottom left is distracting, you should crop it out.
Use highlights and shadows to increase the buildings below. Hope this helps.
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I can see various interesting elements but on the whole they don't seem to be saying anything does it? Maybe you tell us what you like about the picture?
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Originally Posted by espion
I can see various interesting elements but on the whole they don't seem to be saying anything does it? Maybe you tell us what you like about the picture?
I guess I just like the colours... not too sure about the buildings and leaves at the bottom. Still a lot to learn.
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Old 6th June 2006   #7
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Well I think you must have some idea what is it in the picture that speaks or would appeal to the mortal eye. Then you can put these ideas here as to what you think the picture is about and then we can have some fruitful discussions.
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