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Old 2nd June 2006   #1
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Default Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!



Please C & C. Got into photography recently so pretty much a newbie. Using a Canon D350 with 75-300mm, f5.0 lens just 2 weeks back. Used PS to desaturate a bit. To me, I honestly didnt find the image sharp enough and also theres a distracting lamp shade right on her chest. Shot at esplanade on 1Jun2006. Great band from Indonesia.
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Old 2nd June 2006   #2
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

Why didn't you move?



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Old 2nd June 2006   #3
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

I'm not a sharpness freak, but she seems to be moving slightly. The background isn't very good too, but the area can be a little cluttered. What is the wooden thing across here chest?
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Old 2nd June 2006   #4
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

yep she is moving all the time..i cant help that. The object on her chest is a reading light for musicans to read lyrics/chart whatever.
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

Originally Posted by AReality
Why didn't you move?



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I dont get you. Did you mean to say I should be moving along with her?? I was using a tripod...my hands are not that steady and wasnt using any grip.
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Old 2nd June 2006   #6
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

Originally Posted by AReality
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He meant for you to move around....so as to get rid of that distracting lamp
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Old 2nd June 2006   #7
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Default Re: Shaharadja Indo Celtic band!

Originally Posted by sigg
He meant for you to move around....so as to get rid of that distracting lamp
Oh yes I did but the pictures didnt turn out that good. Heres another link from a different angle.

http://s63.photobucket.com/albums/h1...t=IMG_2173.jpg

Guess its my lens cant really do much with it...
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