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    A moment for the Almighty

    Taken while training in India. This soldier was going somewhere when he paused to admire the sunset. Comments pls. Thanks.

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    Doesn't seem like he's admiring the sunset.


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    ya.. quite true. seem to me like he missing home or wat (first impression)

    for a photo, I think the sunset abit too glaring ba, but of course this kinda shot cannot wait for sun to be less glaring then shoot la. ha

    the flare also i feel not too good ba.

    jus my thoughts

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    Quote Originally Posted by sh_37

    A moment for the Almighty

    Taken while training in India. This soldier was going somewhere when he paused to admire the sunset. Comments pls. Thanks.
    your title definitely wrong

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    the title should be

    sibei sian .....

    it's the first thought the guy would have. Looks like he's booking in.

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    Default Re: A moment for the Almighty

    It does not work for me too.

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    Default Re: A moment for the Almighty

    I would place the soldier more to the right to cover up the sun.
    No flare.
    Level the horizon.
    Change the title.

    The idea is there...but the composition has to be changed a little, IMHO.

    Just my newbie two cents.

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    Default Re: A moment for the Almighty

    Erm... okay. I'm bad at making captions. Here's another shot with the man blocking the sun.

    Last edited by sh_37; 1st June 2006 at 10:19 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sh_37
    Erm... okay. I'm bad at making captions. Here's another shot with the man blocking the sun.
    Making up stories for journalism?
    Wow...
    There's a lot to learn besides photography.


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