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Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: West Coast
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![]() A moment for the Almighty Taken while training in India. This soldier was going somewhere when he paused to admire the sunset. Comments pls. Thanks. |
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Join Date: Jun 2003
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Doesn't seem like he's admiring the sunset.
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tampinesss
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ya.. quite true. seem to me like he missing home or wat (first impression)
for a photo, I think the sunset abit too glaring ba, but of course this kinda shot cannot wait for sun to be less glaring then shoot la. ha the flare also i feel not too good ba. jus my thoughts ![]()
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Posts: 385
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the title should be
sibei sian ..... it's the first thought the guy would have. Looks like he's booking in. |
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: West
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It does not work for me too.
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Singapore, CanonGraphers.org
Posts: 3,163
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I would place the soldier more to the right to cover up the sun.
No flare. Level the horizon. Change the title. The idea is there...but the composition has to be changed a little, IMHO. Just my newbie two cents. |
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Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: West Coast
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Erm... okay. I'm bad at making captions. Here's another shot with the man blocking the sun.
![]() Last edited by sh_37; 1st June 2006 at 10:19 PM. |
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Join Date: Jun 2003
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Wow... There's a lot to learn besides photography. . |
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