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Old 31st May 2006   #1
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A moment for the Almighty

Taken while training in India. This soldier was going somewhere when he paused to admire the sunset. Comments pls. Thanks.
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Old 31st May 2006   #2
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Doesn't seem like he's admiring the sunset.


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Old 31st May 2006   #3
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ya.. quite true. seem to me like he missing home or wat (first impression)

for a photo, I think the sunset abit too glaring ba, but of course this kinda shot cannot wait for sun to be less glaring then shoot la. ha

the flare also i feel not too good ba.

jus my thoughts
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Old 1st June 2006   #4
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Default Re: A moment for the Almighty

Originally Posted by sh_37

A moment for the Almighty

Taken while training in India. This soldier was going somewhere when he paused to admire the sunset. Comments pls. Thanks.
your title definitely wrong
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Old 1st June 2006   #5
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the title should be

sibei sian .....

it's the first thought the guy would have. Looks like he's booking in.
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It does not work for me too.
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Old 1st June 2006   #7
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Default Re: A moment for the Almighty

I would place the soldier more to the right to cover up the sun.
No flare.
Level the horizon.
Change the title.

The idea is there...but the composition has to be changed a little, IMHO.

Just my newbie two cents.
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Old 1st June 2006   #8
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Erm... okay. I'm bad at making captions. Here's another shot with the man blocking the sun.


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Originally Posted by sh_37
Erm... okay. I'm bad at making captions. Here's another shot with the man blocking the sun.
Making up stories for journalism?
Wow...
There's a lot to learn besides photography.


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