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Old 30th May 2006   #1
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Default Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

Any comments on this pic? Blessed with a nice cloud formation.

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Old 30th May 2006   #2
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

The composition is excellent
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Old 30th May 2006   #3
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perfect is you remove the left side sticking out building~~~
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the buildings not balanced ... right side seems heavier
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Old 31st May 2006   #5
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sweet. those tourism sites should use this pic instead...

wonder where they get those horrible photos.. or singapore photographers charge high prices for 'skilled labor' =D
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

Originally Posted by espion
the buildings not balanced ... right side seems heavier
Great comment. Let me phone in to the demolition squad...
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ahhahaha


looks good . . not complain about the buildings
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Old 31st May 2006   #8
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Originally Posted by Gunbucker
Great comment. Let me phone in to the demolition squad...
Ya yours too!
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Old 31st May 2006   #9
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Impressive!!!
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Old 1st June 2006   #10
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Thanks everyone for taking time to leave your comments. Really appreciate it.
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Old 2nd June 2006   #11
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A lil more to the right and the composition would have been immaculate
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Old 4th June 2006   #12
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nice!

Originally Posted by Rev
sweet. those tourism sites should use this pic instead...

wonder where they get those horrible photos.. or singapore photographers charge high prices for 'skilled labor' =D
reason why they WON'T use this photo?.. u can't see the words DHL in from this angle.. hehe
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Old 6th June 2006   #13
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Yup I totally agree. Very nice composition, very nice perspective. Only gripe is about the building sticking out of the left frame...
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

seems like most ppl think that this was a great shot taken with good composition. now im not trying to question anyone here, but as an amateur, i would like to know why this picture gets the thumbs up. just trying to learn, thanks if anyone could point out the good points.
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

maybe i should share my thoughts on this picture...

there seems to be many subjects in this picture, i always thought its best to keep it to a single subject... or am i wrong here?
also, the picture seems a bit flat to me... hmmm.....

ok, that was my 2 cents. SMEs pls come in now
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How do you do a HDR picture? is it only in cs2? can cs do HDR? btw teach me how to do the hdr image thks
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

Originally Posted by Zaknafein
seems like most ppl think that this was a great shot taken with good composition. now im not trying to question anyone here, but as an amateur, i would like to know why this picture gets the thumbs up. just trying to learn, thanks if anyone could point out the good points.
it's an able attempt in symmetry. i have to say i don't follow the trend here.
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

Originally Posted by Zaknafein
maybe i should share my thoughts on this picture...

there seems to be many subjects in this picture, i always thought its best to keep it to a single subject... or am i wrong here?
also, the picture seems a bit flat to me... hmmm.....

ok, that was my 2 cents. SMEs pls come in now
you can have as many subjects as you want in a picture. but it's not recommended unless you can organise chaos into a pattern which anyone can follow. 1 or 3 is usually the magic number.

the picture is flat (and tiny might i add which makes for uncomfortable viewing). a better time of day or a curve adjustment might bring out more contrast. and certainly clone out the tips of buildings at the bottom right, that's just untidy.
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Default Re: Aerophile Singapore Balloon ride.

Originally Posted by amsyari
How do you do a HDR picture? is it only in cs2? can cs do HDR? btw teach me how to do the hdr image thks
Hi amsyari, this is not a HDR image.

U can download photomatix from www.hdrsoft.com to generate HDR images.

CS2 can do HDR but i prefers the effect from Photomatix.
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Originally Posted by foxtwo
you can have as many subjects as you want in a picture. but it's not recommended unless you can organise chaos into a pattern which anyone can follow. 1 or 3 is usually the magic number.

the picture is flat (and tiny might i add which makes for uncomfortable viewing). a better time of day or a curve adjustment might bring out more contrast. and certainly clone out the tips of buildings at the bottom right, that's just untidy.
Hi Foxtwo, thanks for you comments. Pushing up the curve somemore will burn out the feathery clouds. What i really need is a circular polarizer, which i did not bring along.

I wanted to create a image that makes the viewer 'look up' thus creating the sense of height. This pic is taken at 10mm and at near sunset, which makes the clouds more contrasty.
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