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Old 24th May 2006   #1
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Old 24th May 2006   #2
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It looks like it is going sideway and not up......sorry for not seeing the perspective......but I like the texture of the structure.
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Old 24th May 2006   #3
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composition is quite messy.

on one hand your drawing attention up, then theres a trail of lights at the bottom
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Old 25th May 2006   #4
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Stairway? Where are the steps?
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Old 25th May 2006   #5
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amsyari, the lights seems to be flaring - most likely overexposed.
if exposure is set right, the lights should be star shape. Just my 2 cents worth.
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Old 26th May 2006   #6
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The small "door" on the bottom left side seems quite redundant in the shot there....Doesn't contribute to the overall picture at all...
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