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![]() This is my virgin image post. haha... 1 of my fav shots on a outing last mondae. Would like to hear some serious C&C... Thanks... ![]()
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i feel that, if you crop away the upper half of the foto (around shoulder of the taller girl upwards), can give the foto some sense of tension and unknown, more interesting? my $0.02.
else i find the ripples up there a waste of space since they dont add a sense of dimension, that what i felt ![]() |
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would be better if you have cropped away the 1/2 hand on the right, its disturbing. |
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Thanks to ExplorerZ and Leews2001 fer ur feedback...
btw this image will be named "Little Lovers" Will try the cropping that has been mention here....
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i new here too. tyring to learn from the comments you got too. hope you can post a final image that you are most satisfied with. |
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The silhouette part works for me. However, the top section is "too" distracting and causes much fatigue to the eyes. Cropping away the top section with give more attention to the "little lovers"....nevertheless, I like the shot.
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i like the shot too, except the sepia tone is too rich for my liking. if it were mine, i'd go for a pale brown tint.
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"we come in peace" "strange encounter" "twilight zone" "mars attack" (I am serious, that's the mood I felt from the pic) ![]() Last edited by rokieto; 11th May 2006 at 11:06 AM. |
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haha...thanks to everione...
all ur views made mi sit up and realize that i can't limit myself. ![]()
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haha...i hope so...
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wow is this really your first image post? it's really something. keep up the good work.
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Excellent photos bro....keep up the good work......
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haha...thanks fer the compliments...sianrong n robin bro!
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