East Coast..

[Jacobyeo]

my shoot this morning.. CandC welcome!

#1


#2


#3


#4


#5

[Jacobyeo]

no comments?

[Swatch]

I like the composition in #5 , but i feel its abit dark...

[obewan]

I like the #2 pic. Interesting...

#5,Tilted horizon and slanting coconut trees don't work for me here.

[Jacobyeo]

hmmm.. not really sure how to brighten the pic without over exposing the sky.. flash at full output doesnt help.. anyone has any ideas? thanks for the comment swatch

[Jacobyeo]

Originally Posted by obewan I like the #2 pic. Interesting... #5,Tilted horizon and slanting coconut trees don't work for me here.

i got a pic of the flats with so many clothings out for drying that it looks like hong kong's apartments haha.. hmm.. thanks for the feedback

[rokieto]

#1, tighter crop perhaps, exclude the excess beach foreground & the distracting background.

#2, watch out for the falling laundry pole L.U.C.K.Y. , becos "Ladies Underwear Can Kill You" on a more serious note, it look too bare, more colorful laundry would be more interesting....watchout!
(also, tilt more or straighten it.)

#3 & #4, tighter crop?

#5, tilting look like accidental shutter released. use a wider angle or need a subject e.g. model (go get some inspiration from will03 in portrait & poses gallery)

[Jacobyeo]

hmm.. noted.. thanks for all the comments.. got to practice more

[rEv09]

i like the 5th one!

[Jacobyeo]

Originally Posted by rEv09 i like the 5th one!

thanks for the compliments! and thanks for all the comments as well.. hope to improve soon!

[Cheesecake]

nice ones...

2, 3, 4 are goodz.