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    hey guys, ur comments wld be very much apreciated =)
    Thanks!

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    urm can u guys view e image?

    c&c welcome! Thanks alot...

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    background is good. i think the main subject here is the lamp post and the bird became a distraction instead of main subject

    juz my noob cents

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    thnks 4 ur comments. but if there were no birds on the lamp post, it wld be boring n lifeless dun u think? I shld ve cropped it tighter i think...

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    i think the city skyline in the background is distracting, you might want to consider alternative positions the next time round

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    i like the birds, but would you think it would be better to have the lampost aligned slightly more to the right? and maybe a slightly tighter crop or closer view of the birds...just my thoughts

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    ya tats wad i tot so too.. i was afraid tt e bird wld fly off so had to take a quick shot.. Haha. thanks for ur suggestions!

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    try a rule of thirds crop.

    its a shame the bird didnt jump off a little bit more =P

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    Improved version.

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    Good effort! But u can play with the cropping.

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    hey, yeah, shld think of more ways to frame the image. Thnks alot!

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    I prefer the improved version.. The buildings were quite distracting in my opinion..
    When I do right, no one remembers. When I do wrong, no one ever forgets.

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    The improved version looks better but my preference for the crop would be to have a little more headspace.

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    thanks..ya i tot sth was lacking in the improved version.. i'll go try out ur suggestion.. =)

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