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    Default Tired Granny & Sunset@ECP

    For your comments & critics..

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    Granny:
    Good: the subjects in the first one is good.... empty teh or kopi glass vs sleeping granny.
    Bad: Colors & contrast look flat. Maybe convert to b&w or more saturate/contrast
    Nitpick: a little soft, would have framed either more table or more space above the granny, she looks a little 'dead'-center horizontally so a little shift vertically would be nice... (pun intended)

    Sunset:
    Good: silouhette of the trees, glitter in the water
    Bad: colors look flat, needs more saturation/contrast
    Nitpick: red flare is a little distracting...

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    Default Re: Tired Granny & Sunset@ECP

    Quote Originally Posted by Rev
    Granny:
    Good: the subjects in the first one is good.... empty teh or kopi glass vs sleeping granny.
    Bad: Colors & contrast look flat. Maybe convert to b&w or more saturate/contrast
    Nitpick: a little soft, would have framed either more table or more space above the granny, she looks a little 'dead'-center horizontally so a little shift vertically would be nice... (pun intended)

    Sunset:
    Good: silouhette of the trees, glitter in the water
    Bad: colors look flat, needs more saturation/contrast
    Nitpick: red flare is a little distracting...
    Thanks for these valuable pointers.. will take note of this in my next shoots..
    for the first one.. colors were orange (tables, walls)everywhere+the bright sunlight made the very bright...

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