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    Default b&W ClosE up BicYcLe modElS

    Hope I post it in the right forum. If its wrong ... mafan moderator to move it.

    My first attempt on shooting abtract.

    If possible pls help C&C, It will be of great help to help me improve ^_^.

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    Last edited by pRoLoS3r; 14th April 2006 at 01:03 AM.

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    Default Re: b&W ClosE up BicYcLe modElS

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    Thank you for viewing. Your help is much appreciated.

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    1 is the strongest of the set... very nice, the tones & wire-frame detail are nicely captured
    2 is a nice abstract impressionist take
    3, 4 & 5 are too messy and the shapes of the bikes become lost with the film, OOF or blurriness...
    6 has a nice sombre mood but feel the bright light source could be at a better position... the background with the furniture is distracting as well...

    my 2 cts... but I like to keep things simple =)
    Last edited by Rev; 14th April 2006 at 04:44 AM.

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    Default Re: b&W ClosE up BicYcLe modElS

    Thanks alot Rev.

    I will take note of the pointers ^_^ and improve on the next shoot . .

    Anyone else who have comments, do come forward and post . THanks in advance

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