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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 57
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Hi..pls comment.
Saw this man flying a kite on a ridge. Took it quite hastily. [IMG] [/IMG]
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Tampines
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the feel is there...but abit dull imho...n are the vigetting intentional?
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 168
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I enjoyed the mood of the photograph, perhaps effected by the slight vignette at the edge and the muted colours.
i also enjoy how this looks like a vignette itself, like a scene from a dream
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Heaven's Gate
Posts: 651
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Although there is vignette, the photo works well in telling the story. Good shot
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Eastern Part
Posts: 311
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I think the vignetting works in this picture to balance out the large portion of black at the bottom, whether intentional or not. If I had the opportunity to frame such a shot, I'd probably have looked for some overhanging branches of trees to to the same.
For me, the only miniute bugbear I have is the slight OOF. Or maybe its just my eyes. |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 57
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Thanks for the comments...really appreciate it.
the vignetting was intentional. OOF was because i had to compress the file in order to upload. took this picture using canon 350d sigma 24-135 f2.8. ![]()
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Love the mood of this picture. Would you mind sharing why left the bottom left part unvignetted? would like to know how it would look like if dark-bordered on all 4 edges.. |
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: bukit batok
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i like the feel of the "bird" trying to break though the drakness, almost succeded, but cant since the man had tie a string to its leg and pulling it back.
man playing god with nature.
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