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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Serangoon
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Hope to get some comments on how to improve this shot. Thanks.
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Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Singapore
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Serangoon
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Clementi Ave 3
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much better lol
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Jurong Area
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actually. now it looks washed out and boring.
what i would have done would be to desaturate the red sign to say 30%? then it would blend in with the rest of the pic and yet speak volumes as it becomes the coloured but subdued focal point. |
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 108
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selective black and white is kinda gimmicky isnt it....
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Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 242
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I don't think that there is anything wrong with selective b&w in itself. Just like any other technique it is good or bad depending on how it is applied.
A splash of colour in an otherwise monochrome image is a visual "joke". Just like all jokes, its success depends on the element of surprise. Something that otherwise would have been just part of the scene suddenly stands out. In this picture, the sign is literally the centre of the image and due to its nature, the obvious centre of attention. Adding colour therefore is basically overkill. |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Serangoon
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2. Under SELECT menu bar, click INVERSE (to inverse selection). 3. Under LAYER menu bar, NEW ADJUSTMENT LAYER and then HUE/SATURATION. "New Lay" dialogbox will popup and click Ok. 4. "Hue/Saturation" dialogbox will popup and enter -100 for SATURATION (or drag slider all the way to the left). There are more than a few ways to achieve the same result depending on personal preference. To me, I find the above fastest. |
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Sembawang
Posts: 3,725
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Try to shoot at different angle. Remember you are a photographer not a designer.
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 182
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Quite like the red sign actually. Desaturating the red a little seems a good idea though.
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tampinesss
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my feel is b/w is enough. the sign and it's "color" is already the center of attraction in the picture. But i still find this pic nice overall.
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Dover Cl East
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Prefer B/W with abit more contrast adding some grain will be fine, I think.
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