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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 441
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Colour is nice.
Maybe position yourself such that a tree trunk blocks the direct sun light. The building shouldn't be in the picture. Straighten the composition. |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Sengkang
Posts: 394
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use lower angle as possible..... I find that the ground (with people and building) is a bit distracting. and yeah straighten the composition.
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Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: In A Suitcase
Posts: 700
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I think minimising the sun might work a little better on top of the other stuff mentioned.
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Cons digger.
Posts: 4,046
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I guess the lighting's a bit flat. Were you trying to capture something like this? ![]() It's not all too impressive on my part as well.. I just adjust levels and saturation a bit.
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Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Freezing Upp Thomson/Mandai!
Posts: 1,440
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I don't really like the tilt and the angle, neither too high or low. I would prefer it to be lower or something. The pic doesnt somehow look natural.
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