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Old 16th March 2006   #1
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How do you actually improve this kinda shots ? Your C&C will be very much appreciated

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Old 16th March 2006   #2
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Colour is nice.

Maybe position yourself such that a tree trunk blocks the direct sun light. The building shouldn't be in the picture. Straighten the composition.
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Old 17th March 2006   #3
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use lower angle as possible..... I find that the ground (with people and building) is a bit distracting. and yeah straighten the composition.
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Old 18th March 2006   #4
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hmm ... alright ... thanks dude
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Old 19th March 2006   #5
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I think minimising the sun might work a little better on top of the other stuff mentioned.
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Old 19th March 2006   #6
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Originally Posted by estronutz
hmm ... alright ... thanks dude
Were you trying to capture the golden leaves with the sun glaring through the canopy?

I guess the lighting's a bit flat. Were you trying to capture something like this?


It's not all too impressive on my part as well.. I just adjust levels and saturation a bit.
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Old 19th March 2006   #7
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I don't really like the tilt and the angle, neither too high or low. I would prefer it to be lower or something. The pic doesnt somehow look natural.
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Old 20th March 2006   #8
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yanyewkay, I'm trying to picture something like that ... any pointers to improve on this kinda shots ? As in ... anyway to improve on the "flatness" of the picture?
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