unsung landscape

Jeff · 12th March 2006

from a much neglected part of chiangmai, 1200m @300mm

hope u like them.

Mezzotint · 12th March 2006

I quite like yr third image, sort of like B&W shot in color. Anyway it's really too bad to shoot in portrait orientated format. Too much black space i.e. 75% of the image frame. You could have shot in landscape format to capture more of the scenery view & tonality.

First image is too messy with poor color match between the green grasses and the dirty yellow soil. Definitely it's out for me.

Something's wrong with the color cast on the background foliage and the composition in the 2ns image. Again, there's poor color match between the strong brown soil and the green plantation. Try converting to B&W and do some dodgings & burnings and necessary cropping to bring out more focus on the main subject. It might help in a way.

Jeff · 12th March 2006

thks for ur comments

havn't got any real comments for long time

4 e 3rd image, there is in fact a "Z" in the dark. Perhaps my monitor is too bright but it does appear on my screen.

12th March 2006	#1
Jeff Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,516	unsung landscape from a much neglected part of chiangmai, 1200m @300mm hope u like them.

12th March 2006	#2
Mezzotint Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Balestier area Posts: 1,040	Re: unsung landscape I quite like yr third image, sort of like B&W shot in color. Anyway it's really too bad to shoot in portrait orientated format. Too much black space i.e. 75% of the image frame. You could have shot in landscape format to capture more of the scenery view & tonality. First image is too messy with poor color match between the green grasses and the dirty yellow soil. Definitely it's out for me. Something's wrong with the color cast on the background foliage and the composition in the 2ns image. Again, there's poor color match between the strong brown soil and the green plantation. Try converting to B&W and do some dodgings & burnings and necessary cropping to bring out more focus on the main subject. It might help in a way. __________________ Mezzotint Blog Site / Portfolio / Contact Me

12th March 2006	#3
Jeff Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,516	Re: unsung landscape thks for ur comments havn't got any real comments for long time 4 e 3rd image, there is in fact a "Z" in the dark. Perhaps my monitor is too bright but it does appear on my screen.