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Old 6th March 2006   #1
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Hi,
Was trying some lighting technic for still life, some how got distracted by the 'baby corn' arrangment.......

Here's the failed arrangment.......




Verv sorry if i post in the wrong segment ( should be in still life )

The end result.....



Any way, All comments and critiques most welcome.

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Old 6th March 2006   #2
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Interesting... #1 is funny
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Old 6th March 2006   #3
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very nice~~~~~~
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Old 8th March 2006   #4
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Originally Posted by bree
very nice~~~~~~
Sorry ....the twin tower




the failed arrangment......




Don't know why it disappeared....
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Old 8th March 2006   #5
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Nice fotos! Like the twin tower most... Try putting a toothpick in between the "towers"
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Old 8th March 2006   #6
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you have awful washed out colours. I've never seen worst looking corn that yours. they look petrified of being photographed.

that's ugly composition. Got 'pointy things' sticking out in all directions, eggs look like smooth stones, the dish looks like it's floating in mid air, lighting's too harsh, smack centre placement...

are you seriously looking for critique or just want to show off your 'twin corn'?

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Old 8th March 2006   #7
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cute corn..
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Old 9th March 2006   #8
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Quite creative.
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Old 9th March 2006   #9
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Cool Dude !
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Old 9th March 2006   #10
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later ppl sue u ... ahhaha ,,,

use 2 corn to look like what ppl pay $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$4 to do ...

ahahhaha

Goood ...
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Old 9th March 2006   #11
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Nice imagination
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Old 9th March 2006   #12
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Originally Posted by foxtwo
you have awful washed out colours. I've never seen worst looking corn that yours. they look petrified of being photographed.

that's ugly composition. Got 'pointy things' sticking out in all directions, eggs look like smooth stones, the dish looks like it's floating in mid air, lighting's too harsh, smack centre placement...

are you seriously looking for critique or just want to show off your 'twin corn'?
Hi,
thanks for the kind, constructive comments n critiques........
Actually it's my first time trying still life, don't really know how to arrange the props. Position my soft umbrella lighting 45 degree and to my right n reflector on my left.....maybe should try with white background. Thanks again.....

Cheers
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Old 9th March 2006   #13
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Very nicely artistic for the Twin towers shot.
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