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    Arrow Dessert

    Hi,
    Thanks for viewing. I would appreciate any constructive feedback. Thanks!


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    Default Re: Dessert

    is the soft focus intended? it's really distracting.

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    Default Re: Dessert

    hmm... ok. Point noted. Thanks!

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    Default Re: Dessert

    Try shooting at different angle & focus hard. You will see the effects.

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    Default Dessert Version 2

    ok, how about this version of the same dessert?


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    Default Re: Dessert

    The second is better, much better composition, but still looks a little soft to me.

    The first one also looks distorted to me

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    yeah.. the first one was shot hand-held over the dessert.. so it was kinda hard to make really sure i was directly overhead. I wanted to try a different perspective.

    On hindsight, I shld prob have used a smaller aperture than 1.8 (was using 50mm).

    The second shot was a more "conventional" angle but I guess DOF was too shallow too.

    Thanks for the pointers!

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    Default Re: Dessert Version 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Hobbesyeo
    ok, how about this version of the same dessert?

    screaming out for some light pattern on the plate to take attention away from the tart for just a few seconds.

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    Default Re: Dessert Version 2

    Quote Originally Posted by foxtwo
    screaming out for some light pattern on the plate to take attention away from the tart for just a few seconds.

    err... I don't quite understand what you are driving at...

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    Default Re: Dessert Version 2

    meaning. dont jus focus on the tart. make some side objects which might complement the main product

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    Default Re: Dessert Version 2

    Quote Originally Posted by germ_boi
    meaning. dont jus focus on the tart. make some side objects which might complement the main product
    oh ... i see.

    Yeah.. the tart does look kinda lonely. Point noted. Thanks!

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