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Old 4th March 2006   #1
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This may not be the best ... Any ideas how to improve this kinda shots ?
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Old 4th March 2006   #2
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erm, these r lego blocks. r u implying tt ur made of plastic?
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Most kids play this when they were young ... Maybe message didn't get conveyed properly ?
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Originally Posted by estronutz
Most kids play this when they were young ... Maybe message didn't get conveyed properly ?
didn't you admit it might not be the best?

i think you're trying a little too hard. Our frequencies all wrong.
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You should've arranged the blocks in a more deliberate manner. Right now they look random. Use color arrangement and patterns to your advantage.
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foxtwo ... maybe I'm really trying too hard ... but any ideas how to improve ? Seriously wanna pick up some pointers
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Default Re: building blocks of life

Originally Posted by estronutz
foxtwo ... maybe I'm really trying too hard ... but any ideas how to improve ? Seriously wanna pick up some pointers
i don't do these kind of shots but if i had to, i'd put a person in to reinforce the point. a child's hand, children in the bg, etc.

Or to push the envelop, i'd replace the kid with an elderly.
maybe even both of them together. but that's not my style.

perhaps what you're looking for is a way to present a human nature without the presence of an actual human? good luck on that, it's beyond me for the moment.
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Originally Posted by rayblade
Background at the back blur. Use Macro lens or increase the aperture.
so wat if the background(there is no background in this case) is blur? and using a marco lens will make it sharp?
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Old 9th March 2006   #9
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hmm thanks foxtwo ... can visualise that
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Do you guys know that LEGO Spend the alot of $$$ on the mould which run those parts ???

Good Fit Evey Fit ..
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