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Join Date: Feb 2006
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![]() jpeg *not sure this is in the correct subforum. mods/admins please move it where suitable. thanks. |
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: bendemeer
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I like the concept that you are trying to portray.
Execution could have been a bit better though. Picture is a bit too dull for me. A bit more detail would have helped, especially for the person in the background. I would also be interested in seeing the version in colour. The red colour of Marlboro pack would have come out nicely. |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 57
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thank you.
i didnt want much details for the subject as i wanted the interpretation to be more open and less direct. i shot this straight in B&W using a compact digital so unfortunately i dont have the colour version. btw, the pack of cig is marlboro lights, so no red ![]() thanks for the input. |
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: the other side
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perhaps a more dynamic and less common composition would've helped. |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 57
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What is the directness may i ask?
As I see it, there could be a few possibilities to the interpretation. Though the title gives a little clue. |
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