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    Default Contemplation



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    Default Re: Contemplation

    I like the concept that you are trying to portray.
    Execution could have been a bit better though.
    Picture is a bit too dull for me. A bit more detail would have helped, especially for the person in the background.
    I would also be interested in seeing the version in colour. The red colour of Marlboro pack would have come out nicely.

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    thank you.
    i didnt want much details for the subject as i wanted the interpretation to be more open and less direct.
    i shot this straight in B&W using a compact digital so unfortunately i dont have the colour version. btw, the pack of cig is marlboro lights, so no red

    thanks for the input.

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    Default Re: Contemplation

    Quote Originally Posted by excelsius
    i didnt want much details for the subject as i wanted the interpretation to be more open and less direct.
    you've failed then unfortunately. it IS "direct".

    perhaps a more dynamic and less common composition would've helped.

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    Default Re: Contemplation

    What is the directness may i ask?
    As I see it, there could be a few possibilities to the interpretation. Though the title gives a little clue.

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