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Old 24th February 2006   #1
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Please feel free to comment and critique. Thanks for looking.
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Old 24th February 2006   #2
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The 4 holes should be the centre focus of the photo.
They should be in the centre.
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Old 24th February 2006   #3
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hmm... what is a window really?

you have:
1. shooting through a window
2. vents (windows) on the wall
3. chimney (window)

windows at the top right are pushing it thou.
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Old 25th February 2006   #4
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Redstone : My intention was not to make that the centre of focus but to just to take the frame asa whole.

Foxtwo : I was considering cropping the right side of the picture to remove the distracting upper right hand windows. Instead, I opted to just burn it in a bit in PS but its still a bit of an eyesore.
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Old 25th February 2006   #5
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Hey, may I tumpang your thread ah??? Here is my window.Comments are welcome.

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Old 25th February 2006   #6
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Tumpang my thread got penalty one.
Must at least comment on my picture then can
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Old 25th February 2006   #7
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Originally Posted by eel
Tumpang my thread got penalty one.
Must at least comment on my picture then can

aiya....I am a newbie lar ...i also need someone to comment my pic leh..how dare I give you comment leh???
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Old 2nd March 2006   #8
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So basically, I have fallen in love with your photographs. This is brilliant! I like how it's not centered but there's still a feeling of symmetry. Great job!
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Old 3rd March 2006   #9
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Hope you're referring to mine Paxluv. It can be a tough crowd around these parts but I'm always encouraged by your feedback. Thanks!
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Old 4th March 2006   #10
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Of course I am referring to you! You never miss a beat. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!
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Old 6th March 2006   #11
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doesn't haf a feeling that it's in s'pore...so calm n peaceful...
gd pic..
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Old 7th March 2006   #12
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Thanks. I'm glad my picture brings out that feeling for you.
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