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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
Posts: 825
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I was sitting on the can, pondering the technicalities of improving my other thread 'Drip'. Looking for some inspiration I found it right in front of me. Love to hear your thoughts on this picture especially about the PS treatment. Thanks!
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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Could you explain how this image ties in with your previous drip image?
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
Posts: 825
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Not much link except that, like I said, I got the inspiration to shoot this while thinking about the other shot. And they're both in the same bathroom/washroom/wc/toilet - however you want to call it.
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 2,808
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might look better if the perspective was corrected.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: California, USA
Posts: 261
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I really like this shot. It's simple, and the colors contrast perfectly with the lock or whatever that thing is. Very clean and conceptual. Brilliant!
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
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Clown: Right. Got to learn how to do that in PS. Also, is this the result of a less-than ideal focal length or did I shoot from a wrong angle?
paxluv: Thanks! Your comments are always so positive and encouraging. Yes, it is a lock on a sliding door. |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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i don't really agree with the amount of empty space. maybe try some other ratio, eg. pano/square. |
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
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Sorry to disappoint. I'm not so 'cheem' wan
I'm keeping the cropping on this one as it is. Only wish the extreme left bar had a little bit more texture or was a slightly different colour. |
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Member
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: California, USA
Posts: 261
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I stole this photo as my desktop background now.
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Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
Posts: 825
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Thanks! I'm very honoured. Now I'm going to sleep with a smile on my face.
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