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    my 1st post in this section.

    title may not be appropiate, cant tink of a better one at e moment.



    please give some feedback, thanks!

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    i think it's like tilted too much. if not, it would be a better picture =).
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    The tilt is ok for me, cos I think it's because of the sloped ground. Can tell cos the man is vertical

    Overall, nice, relaxed mood Just that, for this title, I wouldn't use B&W, IMHO

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    Default Re: Nature walk

    Quote Originally Posted by melvinmah
    my 1st post in this section.

    title may not be appropiate, cant tink of a better one at e moment.



    please give some feedback, thanks!
    I think "A walk in the park" would be more appropriate than "Nature walk" for a title. This is clearly a human-made environment, even with a paved road/walkway on the left.

    The foreground appears a bit empty to me. The walking person is not prominent enough to draw much attention and be the main topic of the picture; but it's again not far enough away that it can be taken as part of the scenery. To me, it is not evident what you want to show.

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    Quote Originally Posted by wiz23
    The tilt is ok for me, cos I think it's because of the sloped ground. Can tell cos the man is vertical

    Overall, nice, relaxed mood Just that, for this title, I wouldn't use B&W, IMHO
    I kinda second the opinion from Wiz that the B&W might not work here. BUT its o nly an opinion. Perhaps if it was like a very nice saturated tone of green it might work well with the title. NIce try thou.

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    hehe okay thanks for all your comments.. all points have been noted

    well i'm still a newbie, still got lots to learn glad to have found clubsnap forums

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