"I'll cover you, just go!"

[Pokka]

[jasphotography]

Quote: Originally posted by Pokka

You may want to increase your depth of field to allow us to see better WHAT (front figure) is covering who.

Quote: Originally posted by jasphotography You may want to increase your depth of field to allow us to see better WHAT (front figure) is covering who.

I would also suggest attempting a more dynamic looking perspective, perhaps at an angle that's more to the front of the figures and with a much tighter crop to emphasise the foreground figure. On a more minor note, the vignetting is also a little distracting, so you might want to crop that away too.

[Pokka]

thanks for the comments. actually i focus more on the back guy, thus i want the foreground to be abit blur. do u all think with 2 in focus will be a better composition?

[MatthewSCL]

Good try...concept is there but take note not to have the front element merge with the object.....kind of distracting....

try to use more soldiers and make them cluster infront (out of forcus).....then forcus on the single soldier behind..no harm trying....

Hope that helps...

[sbs99]

Abit too much empty space....err...tats how i feel...for others...i duno.