I really do...
but is the pen/pencil red or black?
I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.
hmm i agree. notice the I and R(foreveR), they seem out of focus. maybe u can move the pen further away so tt the words can be clear while the pen is still kept blurOriginally Posted by Stoned
put the red maker pen there instead...
maybe with a signature of some sort too?
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i also thought that that slight oof is acceptable (sharp isn't wrong too) as long as it is not too oof.Originally Posted by ray_stinger