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    Default I love you...

    I really do...


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    gd idea.

    but is the pen/pencil red or black?

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    I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Stoned
    I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.
    hmm i agree. notice the I and R(foreveR), they seem out of focus. maybe u can move the pen further away so tt the words can be clear while the pen is still kept blur

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    Thx for the feedbacks..actually the slight oof for the words is a delibrate attempt. Because I wanna create a slightly dreamy mood.

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    put the red maker pen there instead...

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    maybe with a signature of some sort too?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ray_stinger
    Thx for the feedbacks..actually the slight oof for the words is a delibrate attempt. Because I wanna create a slightly dreamy mood.
    i also thought that that slight oof is acceptable (sharp isn't wrong too) as long as it is not too oof.

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