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    Default Rage is the only freedom left me.



    comments most welcome. thanks for viewing.
    Last edited by skipper53; 23rd January 2006 at 09:03 PM.

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    Default Re: Rage is the only freedom left me.

    the pores are too obvious that will distract viewers from the theme. try using lens blur on all except the eyes and minor lens blur on the flow of tears. repackage it in black borders with thin white stroke. and a "branding" and title as well.

    Very good concept!

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    Default Re: Rage is the only freedom left me.

    some changes made, took a fellow photgrapher's advice.

    thank u NMSS 2, any better? pls tell me yea?

    once again, comments most welcome. thanks for viewing.

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    yeah! nicely done! the white border is uneven?

    i did a little PS on your pic in my com earlier. however your version seems better cos i applied too much lens blur! pm your email to me if you want to take a look.

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    Default Re: Rage is the only freedom left me.

    i like this piece....

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    Default Re: Rage is the only freedom left me.

    e highlight of his nose is distracting. u could burn in some.

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    hey man tts my nose! how could u think of burning it! =p

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    Default Re: Rage is the only freedom left me.



    last altered post and yes i did burn my nose =p

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