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    Took this picture in Chiang Rai last month.



    B/w conversion done in PS. Critiques welcome.

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    tight crop without the blown highlight of the subject's back will be good. draws viewers towards the subject (person) or action (smoking). good picture.

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    Thanks for the comments. I think the highlights in the web version looks more blown out than it actually is. Oh well!

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    Nice shot. The first thing I saw was the pall of smoke and then the face.

    A tighter crop might help but I think the photo looks good as it is.

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    Actually, I intended for it to have more space, to indicate the act of thinking. She was rather deep in thought at that point of time.

    Thanks for commenting.

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    I like it. It tells me that she is deep in thought and the pall of smoke adds to the intensity.

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    The exact emotions I wanted to extract from viewers!

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