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    Default Silhouette - for your comment

    Took this photo a couple of months ago off Changi Coast. For your comments and critiques:



    Thanks.

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    very plainly a silhouette of a container ship. e only attractive points are the colour of the orangy-yellow sky & the hints of similarities on the ship- eg. container cranes. if u could have done a hard crop, then it'll be interesting.

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    the sea looked kinda out of place due to the colour tone doesnt match/contrast with the sky.

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    Quote Originally Posted by foxtwo
    very plainly a silhouette of a container ship. e only attractive points are the colour of the orangy-yellow sky & the hints of similarities on the ship- eg. container cranes. if u could have done a hard crop, then it'll be interesting.
    Thanks for the comment. I will try that, but I think if I were to crop such a small area, the phot0 will not be sharp anymore. When I took the photo, I tried to zoom into the crane, but was too far from the ship.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NMSS_2
    the sea looked kinda out of place due to the colour tone doesnt match/contrast with the sky.

    Thanks. It is my Photoshop skill Tried a few combination of shadow/highlight and brightness contrast, but can get the right tone

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    Default Re: Silhouette - for your comment

    I personally think the coloring is brilliant and brings out the ship even more. I like this shot very much!

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    Default Re: Silhouette - for your comment

    Thanks Paxluv. It was a lovely evening off Changi and I took the photo on a yacht.

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    hmm.. the sky sort of miss out something.. if there a plane pass throught on top. That will be great.
    And since the sea color tone is dark, you might wanna remove 70% of the sea.

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    Crop tighter.
    Emphasise the two X and the 2 "submarines".

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