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    Default Re: The Sunset need feedback

    The photos look good to me.
    TO SEE, TO FEEL, TO PHOTOGRAPH.

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    1st and 2nd

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    Composition wise, not good for all the pictures. Colours may be quite strong and nice, but overall, there is no focal point in any of the pictures.

    #1 - slanted horizon
    #2 - slanted horizon, and lack of foreground subject (typical of aircraft shots)
    #3 - distracting lampposts and crane arms in the silohuette; may wish to move your position for better angle
    #4 - no strong focal point; building and trees not forming a strong subject for the sunset shot
    #5 - again, no point of interest. However, I do see some potential for #5 here. I propose a crop for more impactful composition as follows:


    #6 - Distracting wires hanging from left to right, may wish to move the composition down a little using the rule of the thirds.

    just 2 cents here for your considerations.

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    #5 looks like some mountain range with weird leaveless trees on them

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    well... that is creative intepretation of the photo

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    Default Re: The Sunset need feedback

    U might like to refer to the thread below, the photos are

    http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=209153

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