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Old 9th December 2005   #1
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Its just a photo expressing to leave the built up city.
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Old 10th December 2005   #2
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can feel the claustrophobia, good use of the building image
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Old 10th December 2005   #3
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i think its nice but from yr subject i think some elements is missing from this pic ... anyway i like the technique use here
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nice work... is this the national library?
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Wow.... thnx guys, btw what is claustrophobia?

Yea, it's outside National Library.

Hmm, maybe the left side too much empty (black) space?
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check the dictionary
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muhahaha, yea i checking it now ~ !!!
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good panning technique but composition needs some re-think. the overhead walkway in the middle spoils it for me. also you should consider cropping off some/ most of the left black portion. ; )
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Old 17th December 2005   #9
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ah some fresh air ... a new treatment to a much-photographed subject ... good work
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Old 17th December 2005   #10
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wow... what did you do to achieve that effect?
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claustrophobia is the fear of physically confined spaces

example if u purposely trap a claustrophobic person in a lift or in a cage he will scream and go mad
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