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Old 7th December 2005   #1
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These two photos are in need of a caption. Tentatively I have named them 'lonely,' "forlorn."
I know they are lame excuses for a title.
Anyone like to help me on this.
Thanks and feel free to critique and comments.



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Old 7th December 2005   #2
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Hi Lion King, maybe you can name the first one "Lost in Time" ~ she has that lost look on her face and the background (B/W) seems to protray a suspension of space and time..

Just my feeble attempt.. Hope you dun mind
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Old 7th December 2005   #3
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1st: "Forgotten Passion"

2nd: "Lost Love"
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Old 7th December 2005   #4
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1st: Spurned!

2nd: Dumped!

Jus kidding
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Old 8th December 2005   #5
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Originally Posted by Rui
Hi Lion King, maybe you can name the first one "Lost in Time" ~ she has that lost look on her face and the background (B/W) seems to protray a suspension of space and time..

Just my feeble attempt.. Hope you dun mind
Rui....'Lost in time' is aptly title and it is not a feeble attempt.
Thank you.

Originally Posted by Rashkae
1st: "Forgotten Passion"

2nd: "Lost Love"
Thanks Rashkae

Anyone...anymore??
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Old 8th December 2005   #6
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pic 1: "nostalgia"

pic 2: "longing"

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Old 8th December 2005   #7
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only have idea for the first. "next step?"
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Old 8th December 2005   #8
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1: To Nowhere

2: Rose among the torns
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Old 8th December 2005   #9
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1 : contemplextion
2 : separation
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Old 8th December 2005   #10
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Thanks for the response, Zaren, Novello, Esmond and Angel.
They have given me some ideas for a title.
Guys....appreciate your help.
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Old 9th December 2005   #11
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1) spiritless midst

2) abandon (forsaken) hopes
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Old 9th December 2005   #12
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hokkien version..

1) gon gon tan li zi see lang

2) sim ai a lang bo lai
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Old 9th December 2005   #13
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为什么你还不来?
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Old 9th December 2005   #14
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I am just wondering..why do you need suggestions? when you take the picture, is there no inspiration to let the image tell a story and to, ultimately leave the viewer to ihs/her own interpretation?
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Old 9th December 2005   #15
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oh and, caption and title are 2 different things....

just to try to contribute, ill name the first one Act Cute, and the second one Act Gothic ( or Act Black, or Act Sad )


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Old 11th December 2005   #16
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Originally Posted by DT_
1) spiritless midst

2) abandon (forsaken) hopes
Thanks DT for the above and this....

Originally Posted by DT_
hokkien version..

1) gon gon tan li zi see lang

2) sim ai a lang bo lai
Originally Posted by lui002
为什么你还不来?
lui002...thanks for this oso.
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Old 11th December 2005   #17
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How about

Solace in silence -for no.1

Unretrievable love - for no.2
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Old 11th December 2005   #18
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Originally Posted by doug3fflux
I am just wondering..why do you need suggestions? when you take the picture, is there no inspiration to let the image tell a story and to, ultimately leave the viewer to ihs/her own interpretation?
Douglas.....believe me, there were many inspirational ideas on how to pose Victoria running thru my head at that time. Unfortunately, I was not the only one at the shoot and it wouldn't be fair to impose my ideas on the rest. There was a theme....a gothic story line.
I would had like the shoot to be base on that or something similar like this.... http://180degreeimaging.com/180mag/0.../Asmussen.html
With my limited cranal disposition, I have no other resolve other than to pick the
ingenuities of my fellow peers here.
Thank you for your post.
I hope this explains.
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Old 11th December 2005   #19
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Originally Posted by doug3fflux
oh and, caption and title are 2 different things....


Douglas

Picky aren't you?
Anyway.....thank you for your contribution.
Appreciate them.
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Old 11th December 2005   #20
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Originally Posted by NE clicks clicks
How about

Solace in silence -for no.1

Unretrievable love - for no.2
Thank you NE clicks clicks.
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