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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Northern
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1st time posting sunrise using KM 5D and need some comments to improve.
1. Resizing and auto level were done. ![]() 2. Tried diff setting for the aperture. Only resizing was done. ![]() Noob here, tips for improvement please. Thank you in advance. |
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Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: A bivouac near you
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Image 1 works fine for me, just a tad too warm I feel but it's a personal feeling.
Image 2 might have looked better if you had the sun slightly lower in the horizon. Also, the stick that's sticking out of the water in image 1, if you had caught that with the sun in image 2, wow...POWER liao. ![]() My personal 2 cents worth. |
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Join Date: Mar 2004
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I think u'll have a really neat abstract if u kept the bottom half of #2. the image is so big i can only view it in halfs. lolz.
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Amazon Forest
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can see you are pushing to the limit with your setting!
A.S of KM5D #2...where the were-wolf?
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: singapore
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Maybe you can try cropping the lower part of the second picture? I really love the sun partially hidden behind the clouds at the top left, and I feel the bottom part of the picture sort of spoils the mood.
Just my 2 cents. Ronnie |
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Singapore
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I like your first picture. Maybe if the sun is not dead center, it might be better.
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