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Old 6th December 2005   #1
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Default Sunrise @ ECP

1st time posting sunrise using KM 5D and need some comments to improve.

1. Resizing and auto level were done.



2. Tried diff setting for the aperture. Only resizing was done.



Noob here, tips for improvement please. Thank you in advance.
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Old 6th December 2005   #2
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

Image 1 works fine for me, just a tad too warm I feel but it's a personal feeling.

Image 2 might have looked better if you had the sun slightly lower in the horizon. Also, the stick that's sticking out of the water in image 1, if you had caught that with the sun in image 2, wow...POWER liao.

My personal 2 cents worth.
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Old 7th December 2005   #3
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

Originally Posted by vince
Image 1 works fine for me, just a tad too warm I feel but it's a personal feeling.

Image 2 might have looked better if you had the sun slightly lower in the horizon. Also, the stick that's sticking out of the water in image 1, if you had caught that with the sun in image 2, wow...POWER liao.

My personal 2 cents worth.
Thank you Vince for your comments and tips. Will try to improve more next time.
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Old 7th December 2005   #4
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

I think u'll have a really neat abstract if u kept the bottom half of #2. the image is so big i can only view it in halfs. lolz.
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Old 7th December 2005   #5
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

can see you are pushing to the limit with your setting!
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#2...where the were-wolf?
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Old 7th December 2005   #6
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

Originally Posted by foxtwo
I think u'll have a really neat abstract if u kept the bottom half of #2. the image is so big i can only view it in halfs. lolz.
I think i agree with you foxtwo, guess it will be better to have the sun much lower to the horizon as advised by vince. Will take note of that next time.
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Old 7th December 2005   #7
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

Originally Posted by dominator
can see you are pushing to the limit with your setting!
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#2...where the were-wolf?
Guess the were-wolf is hiding then, as its already sunrise
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Old 8th December 2005   #8
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Maybe you can try cropping the lower part of the second picture? I really love the sun partially hidden behind the clouds at the top left, and I feel the bottom part of the picture sort of spoils the mood.

Just my 2 cents.


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Old 12th December 2005   #9
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I like your first picture. Maybe if the sun is not dead center, it might be better.
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Old 13th December 2005   #10
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Default Re: Sunrise @ ECP

Originally Posted by ronnie_sjr
Maybe you can try cropping the lower part of the second picture? I really love the sun partially hidden behind the clouds at the top left, and I feel the bottom part of the picture sort of spoils the mood.

Just my 2 cents.


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Thanks Ronnie, will take note of that.


Originally Posted by 3pin
I like your first picture. Maybe if the sun is not dead center, it might be better.
Thanks, glad you like it. Will keep note of your points too next time.
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