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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 73
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Having a bit of fun and playing around a bit with concepts.
Comments. : http://photobucket.com/albums/v632/w...rent=screw.jpg |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: 270 degree of Singapore
Posts: 6,700
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![]() Feel like the focus is not very right, should focus on the top of the centre screw, and it can be more in front a bit to make it in the centre of focus. The photo can be sharpen a bit through in-camera setting by increase sharpness +1 or +2 depends on your liking, or through PS's unsharp mask. Just my amateur thinking. Please don't blast me.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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As for the in-camera sharpness, it's as good as it gets, as I used my Pana FX5 for this one and not my KM5D, ![]() |
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 1,533
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agreed with the focus comment: needs more DOF so at least the whole black screw is sharp. Also maybe more directional lightning to bring up the textural difference in the two types of screws. But good idea overall.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 73
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Sometimes have an idea in my head, but very often don't know how to execute it properly. Guess I have to improve the technical skills a bit. ![]() |
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