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Old 1st December 2005   #1
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Default Newbie needs your comments : Skeleton

Haven't post in Critique Corner for long time liao.

Pls tell me what u think and how to improve. Thanks.

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Old 1st December 2005   #2
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Hmmm I like the saturation + color, if I were to take this shot (I repeat: ME) I would use a wider angle, make the tree smaller in the entire frame, cover more of the skies
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Old 1st December 2005   #3
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i like the saturation too.

concur with espn on using a wider angle. composition looks abit weird to me. would have played safe and placed the main subject at the bottom left corner, due to the fact that the shrubs near the base of the tree looks diff from the rest of the undergrowth.
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Old 1st December 2005   #4
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Default Re: Newbie needs your comments : Skeleton

Originally Posted by espn
Hmmm I like the saturation + color, if I were to take this shot (I repeat: ME) I would use a wider angle, make the tree smaller in the entire frame, cover more of the skies
Thanks. I am also thinking about the composition, how to make this picture stand out. Lots of pics of this tree posted from Sunday's punggol outing.
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Old 1st December 2005   #5
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Originally Posted by wainism
i like the saturation too.

concur with espn on using a wider angle. composition looks abit weird to me. would have played safe and placed the main subject at the bottom left corner, due to the fact that the shrubs near the base of the tree looks diff from the rest of the undergrowth.
Thanks. So if I crop the bottom and a little of the left........
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