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Old 29th November 2005   #1
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first time posting here..
now that the Os are over, have more time on my hands.. anyway what do you all think of this shot..

give you the feeling that you are being attacked by bees??
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Old 29th November 2005   #2
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nice flower but busy background
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Old 29th November 2005   #3
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It may look better if u zoom in on one of the flowers, I'm not sure ...

U can do a crop and see
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Old 30th November 2005   #4
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need stronger light to bring up the very intricate details in this flower, which is Vanda species I think.
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Old 30th November 2005   #5
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maybe it needs more DOF
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Old 30th November 2005   #6
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thanks for all the comments.. was using a PnS, so DOF not really much..
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Old 30th November 2005   #7
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Personally I find the shot too messy, both foreground and background. Use a macro lens and focus on one of the flowers. Try capturing its texture and graduating hues. Scene has much potential for macro photography.
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Old 1st December 2005   #8
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Originally Posted by J-Chan
first time posting here..
now that the Os are over, have more time on my hands.. anyway what do you all think of this shot..

give you the feeling that you are being attacked by bees??

yeah......if you can PS it a bit more...
I am sure you can make it look Fantasy....ie medieval mythical creatures in swarms.
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