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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tampinesss
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Hi, my first try with zoom burst, tried it on a xmas tree in taka,
was quite excited when i saw the effects it has on the xmas tree lights. Please feel free to comment. Thanks! ![]()
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Bt Batok
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looks magnificant but otherwise kinda useless. unless ur doing abstract, i would prefer a normal shot
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tampinesss
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ha.. ya ya.. no meaning to the picture at all..
Not sure if this one works better? Thanks! ![]()
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Bt. Timah
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I like this shot. The framing is very different and its an interesting angle to the same old perhaps over shot xmas tree. The highlights in the background are a little distracting, otherwise its good. Might want to try a wider aperature/longer focal length lens to throw the background out of focus so the highlights become less prominent. |
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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just curious.....was the zooming at wide to tele or tele to wide?
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tampinesss
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Thanks Ortega, hmm. any suggestions on the composition itself? cuz i cannot really think of any others now besides placing it in the middle..
Hi Righton, itz from Tele to wide. but i was trying also, so not sure if there are other methods or correct techniques. I did something like - Half press to focus, zoom out and press fully
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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agreed with ortega. good technique. composition, maybe cropped it all the way down to just the zooming lights and u have an abstract ... can do the same with PS and then u can have layers and even more compositional possibilities.
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