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Old 17th November 2005   #1
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Hi, pls comment on the following photo!!! tks


p/s: ignore my little toe...
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Old 17th November 2005   #2
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i see more of the big pole than spirals
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Old 17th November 2005   #3
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Originally Posted by hazekang
i see more of the big pole than spirals
hmmm pt taken. tks!
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Old 18th November 2005   #4
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maybe some imaginative cropping to just focus on the spiral and the texture
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Old 18th November 2005   #5
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Originally Posted by espion
maybe some imaginative cropping to just focus on the spiral and the texture
like this?

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Old 20th November 2005   #6
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hahaha this is TOOOO focused ... where's the spiral?
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Old 21st November 2005   #7
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Is your balancing good? Is the center pole top flat? I think the photo will be nice if you dare to stand on the center top taking the photo of your feet and the stairs.....

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Old 23rd November 2005   #8
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Originally Posted by JCYRHS
like this?

I like the idea. Should experiment with various focus points and DOF and see which comes out best.
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Old 24th November 2005   #9
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Ben1223: Thanks!! i'll take a few of such shots with various focus next time!

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