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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: serangoon nth
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Done some time ago. Critiques welcome.
![]() Last edited by tiong78; 15th November 2005 at 11:27 PM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Bt. Timah
Posts: 1,375
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Composition wise its a nice head and shoulders shot. Would be better if she loses the cigarette though.
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: serangoon nth
Posts: 532
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Thanks for the comment.
Anything else anyone wishes to point out? |
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Clementi
Posts: 2,470
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shes not really smoking right? cos her lips seem to be quite far apart. i dont think ppl smoke with their lips open leh.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 40
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its a good photo, but i would use a black background and actually have her exhale smoke when you shoot to make it look more sinister.
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: serangoon nth
Posts: 532
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she was smoking. probably needs to capture 1 with her exhaling some smoke the next time.
ya. i found the background somewhat distracting as well.. anything else? |
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Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Cony Island
Posts: 787
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Just show the two fingers holding the cigerette will lokk nicer in my opinion..
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