Smoker

tiong78 · 15th November 2005

Done some time ago. Critiques welcome.

solarii · 15th November 2005

Composition wise its a nice head and shoulders shot. Would be better if she loses the cigarette though.

tiong78 · 17th November 2005

Thanks for the comment.
Anything else anyone wishes to point out?

Isaiahfortythirtyone · 18th November 2005

shes not really smoking right? cos her lips seem to be quite far apart. i dont think ppl smoke with their lips open leh.

rhp · 18th November 2005

its a good photo, but i would use a black background and actually have her exhale smoke when you shoot to make it look more sinister.

tiong78 · 19th November 2005

she was smoking. probably needs to capture 1 with her exhaling some smoke the next time.
ya. i found the background somewhat distracting as well..

anything else?

GanS_n_PoserS · 19th November 2005

Just show the two fingers holding the cigerette will lokk nicer in my opinion..

15th November 2005	#1
tiong78 Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: serangoon nth Posts: 532	Smoker Done some time ago. Critiques welcome. Last edited by tiong78; 15th November 2005 at 11:27 PM.

15th November 2005	#2
solarii Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Bt. Timah Posts: 1,375	Re: Smoker Composition wise its a nice head and shoulders shot. Would be better if she loses the cigarette though.

17th November 2005	#3
tiong78 Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: serangoon nth Posts: 532	Re: Smoker Thanks for the comment. Anything else anyone wishes to point out?

18th November 2005	#4
Isaiahfortythirtyone Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Clementi Posts: 2,470	Re: Smoker shes not really smoking right? cos her lips seem to be quite far apart. i dont think ppl smoke with their lips open leh.

18th November 2005	#5
rhp New Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 40	Re: Smoker its a good photo, but i would use a black background and actually have her exhale smoke when you shoot to make it look more sinister.

19th November 2005	#6
tiong78 Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: serangoon nth Posts: 532	Re: Smoker she was smoking. probably needs to capture 1 with her exhaling some smoke the next time. ya. i found the background somewhat distracting as well.. anything else?

19th November 2005	#7
GanS_n_PoserS Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Cony Island Posts: 787	Re: Smoker Just show the two fingers holding the cigerette will lokk nicer in my opinion..