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    Default Smoker

    Done some time ago. Critiques welcome.
    Last edited by tiong78; 15th November 2005 at 11:27 PM.

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    Default Re: Smoker

    Composition wise its a nice head and shoulders shot. Would be better if she loses the cigarette though.

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    Thanks for the comment.
    Anything else anyone wishes to point out?

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    Default Re: Smoker

    shes not really smoking right? cos her lips seem to be quite far apart. i dont think ppl smoke with their lips open leh.

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    its a good photo, but i would use a black background and actually have her exhale smoke when you shoot to make it look more sinister.

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    she was smoking. probably needs to capture 1 with her exhaling some smoke the next time.
    ya. i found the background somewhat distracting as well..

    anything else?

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    Default Re: Smoker

    Just show the two fingers holding the cigerette will lokk nicer in my opinion..

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