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Old 15th November 2005   #1
w.s.y
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I took this when i visited ShangHai, and saw this lady working, took this in the crowd....

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Old 15th November 2005   #2
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A very nice informal portrait! A pity about the moving element on the right (what is it?)

Crop tighter to remove it. You picture will have more impact without the blur drawing the viewer's interest away from the lady.

Other then that its a good angle. The two curious onlookers at the back complement the image nicely.
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