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14th November 2005
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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Nuts & Bots
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 [/IMG]Hi all... first time posting here.... hope that will give me your comments, helping me learn more... thx...  |
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15th November 2005
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Thomson
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Re: Nuts & Bots
Quite an interesting composition. Can't decide if I like it though. I like the contrast of the wooden? table running through but maybe the gap is too wide?
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15th November 2005
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Re: Nuts & Bots
i think you need rusty colours to make it more outstanding.
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15th November 2005
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Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Singapore
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Re: Nuts & Bots
You may want to increase the depth of field. The focus is on container-wall on the lower left where there's no particular subject, while the center nuts are slightly out of focus.
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15th November 2005
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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Re: Nuts & Bots
i do agree with all your comments..... alittle rust and more focus will definetly make the picture nicer.... haha.... thx alot..
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15th November 2005
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 1,533
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Re: Nuts & Bots
OOF and not sure whats ur subject ... think u not sure what u shooting too ...
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