Two Benches

weg · 14th November 2005

i like the tones and the textures in this... would have preferred a frontal shot though..

Tuna · 21st November 2005

Originally Posted by weg

i like the tones and the textures in this... would have preferred a frontal shot though..

Thank you for your comment/critique of this image.

Tuna

rEveRie · 27th November 2005

i like the mood and texture... it leads me in. great!

retrospect · 27th November 2005

nice one again Tuna.

Try going in more, might work better. Right now, the frame looks a little loose. Perhaps you cal remove some of tehe trees and the white thingy on the right.

Give it a crop and see what happens. Also, I think that man has an interesting expression, so going in tighter will accentuate it.

Hope this helps.

khairi · 28th November 2005

Originally Posted by retrospect

nice one again Tuna.

Try going in more, might work better. Right now, the frame looks a little loose. Perhaps you cal remove some of tehe trees and the white thingy on the right.

Give it a crop and see what happens. Also, I think that man has an interesting expression, so going in tighter will accentuate it.

Hope this helps.

sorry, i dun agree with you, by doing what you say, you are telling Tuna to do a portraiture.
I think tuna is showing you slices of life that he see everyday.

the first few questions that struck me when looking at this pict was, does that box belong to the man on the bench? is he a beggar? a homeless? what could be inside the box? Is he really a homeless that he had to sleep on the bench? Is he the ONLY one there?

questions questions questions...

rEveRie · 28th November 2005

Originally Posted by khairi

sorry, i dun agree with you, by doing what you say, you are telling Tuna to do a portraiture.
I think tuna is showing you slices of life that he see everyday.

the first few questions that struck me when looking at this pict was, does that box belong to the man on the bench? is he a beggar? a homeless? what could be inside the box? Is he really a homeless that he had to sleep on the bench? Is he the ONLY one there?

questions questions questions...

i agree with you,
the wide space creates a greater sense of loneliness =)

13th November 2005	#1
Tuna Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 52	Two Benches

14th November 2005	#2
weg Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: WSSS Posts: 728	Re: Two Benches i like the tones and the textures in this... would have preferred a frontal shot though..

27th November 2005	#4
rEveRie Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Nikon Posts: 263	Re: Two Benches i like the mood and texture... it leads me in. great!

27th November 2005	#5
retrospect New Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 28	Re: Two Benches nice one again Tuna. Try going in more, might work better. Right now, the frame looks a little loose. Perhaps you cal remove some of tehe trees and the white thingy on the right. Give it a crop and see what happens. Also, I think that man has an interesting expression, so going in tighter will accentuate it. Hope this helps.