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    Default Please help me improve

    Hi all, I am new at this and would greatly appreciate some critique on my photo.

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    Thanks a lot
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    Default Re: Please help me improve

    Quote Originally Posted by DarNikon
    Hi all, I am new at this and would greatly appreciate some critique on my photos.

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    Thanks a lot
    firstly you will need to focus on the subject (the boy or the splashing water)
    change your point of view so that the background is nice (without the yellow poles)
    and last post process to make your image better.

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    Yes agree, subject blurred and yup the yellow pole. Thanks a lot for your feedback.

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    Default Re: Please help me improve

    you should read the guidelines for posting in this sub forum

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    I think a portrait crop will make it better.
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    yeah i agree.. tink tt a portrait crop wld b betta.. juz my 2 cents worth..

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    technially apart it is a nice scene - the water spray, the smile and the twinkle which we see in our eyes.

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    I feel that you should either move more to the left to capture a profile of his face, or more to the right to capture his whole face from an angle.

    For portraiture (even informal one like these), avoid capturing a split profile where the nose "breaks" the line of the face and part of the other eye is visible.

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