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Old 7th November 2005   #1
ben77
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Default flower petal...



flower petal...
donno how to titled it to make it interesting..
any title to come out with.. ways to improve it??
i b&w the floor..
should it be nicer in full colour?
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Old 7th November 2005   #2
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Default Re: flower petal...

Your image is too large, pls resize. Concentrate on making the image interesting rather than the title, some have labelled their images "untitled" and their images have suffered no consequences. This is a plain, boring composition. You have not made use of lines on scene, they lead nowhere. Having just a lone petal on such a drab unhappening background is unattractive. If the interest is in the petal then consider moving it to another location for a better composition. That is allowed.
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Old 7th November 2005   #3
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hm.. how to use lines in a picture ar?
when u say
You have not made use of lines on scene, they lead nowhere
i dont get wat u mean ..
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Old 8th November 2005   #4
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Originally Posted by ben77
hm.. how to use lines in a picture ar?
when u say
You have not made use of lines on scene, they lead nowhere
i dont get wat u mean ..
the use of leading lines is a basic tool of composition. you use lines to lead the viewer's eye.
in your photos case you could have used the lines on the floor to direct the viewers eye to the petal.
basic photography books will explain it better (and with examples)
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