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Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 59
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![]() flower petal... donno how to titled it to make it interesting.. any title to come out with.. ways to improve it?? i b&w the floor.. should it be nicer in full colour? |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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Your image is too large, pls resize. Concentrate on making the image interesting rather than the title, some have labelled their images "untitled" and their images have suffered no consequences. This is a plain, boring composition. You have not made use of lines on scene, they lead nowhere. Having just a lone petal on such a drab unhappening background is unattractive. If the interest is in the petal then consider moving it to another location for a better composition. That is allowed.
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Member
Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 59
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hm.. how to use lines in a picture ar?
when u say You have not made use of lines on scene, they lead nowhere i dont get wat u mean .. |
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Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Bedok, Singapore
Posts: 548
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in your photos case you could have used the lines on the floor to direct the viewers eye to the petal. basic photography books will explain it better (and with examples) |
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