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Old 6th November 2005   #1
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Arrow Starry

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Personally i like how the man at the top of the escalator bring out the dimensions of the place
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Old 6th November 2005   #2
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lower is better, lower to include the entire escalator and a more dramatic angle up
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Old 6th November 2005   #3
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Originally Posted by icarus
Any comments?



Personally i like how the man at the top of the escalator bring out the dimensions of the place

Love this vibrant shot.

btw what are you suppose to do now har
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Old 6th November 2005   #4
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Originally Posted by hOrizoNsKy
Love this vibrant shot.

btw what are you suppose to do now har
okok i go do it now

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Old 6th November 2005   #5
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Originally Posted by eikin
lower is better, lower to include the entire escalator and a more dramatic angle up
Roger that!
Will return to wheelock place with my film camera + the fisheye.. this time must capture the entire escalator
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Old 6th November 2005   #6
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Old 6th November 2005   #7
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Originally Posted by icarus
Roger that!
Will return to wheelock place with my film camera + the fisheye.. this time must capture the entire escalator
fisheye?! woohoo ... can imagine that already can consider a symmetrical composition with the escalator in the middle also
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Old 6th November 2005   #8
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Good shot, James! But the people at the bottom of the escalator distracts from the guy at the top. If you eliminate them, it'll be very good!
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Old 7th November 2005   #9
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Good shot, James! But the people at the bottom of the escalator distracts from the guy at the top. If you eliminate them, it'll be very good!
Thanks!!
*cocks sniper rifle* will eliminate them the next time i go there haha
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Old 11th November 2005   #10
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i feel that it would be better to crop away the entrance to the shop below (borders?), I find it distracting and it spoils the mood created by the "stars"
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Old 11th November 2005   #11
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Are we allowed to shoot at wheelock? Would the guards come to chase you away? Was tempted to shoot the 'stars' but did not because of the guard walking around.
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Old 13th November 2005   #12
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the guard chased me away that day...
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Old 14th November 2005   #13
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I was there during closing time.... there are the usual guards in white, but they didn't stop me...
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Originally Posted by icarus
I was there during closing time.... there are the usual guards in white, but they didn't stop me...
Maybe, the 'weapons' you carry is more than them, they see already also scare...
Who will dare to stop you ??
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Old 18th November 2005   #16
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wah!! so nice!!!
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Old 18th November 2005   #17
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Originally Posted by obewan
Maybe, the 'weapons' you carry is more than them, they see already also scare...
Who will dare to stop you ??
Hahaa... i trimmed down my gear already... Was carrying a small small cam and a small small lens
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Old 18th November 2005   #18
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Originally Posted by drumma
wah!! so nice!!!
Thanks for the compliments bro!
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Old 18th November 2005   #19
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very nice...

Icarus.. i will prob crop left and bottom.... leaving the top man in the picture but crop off the others...
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