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    Default Please comment on composition



    I did PS on the shot above...

    Please comment on the manner the photo was composed...
    how to shoot it better....and how can I PS it better?

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    Default Re: Please comment on composition

    Too much and too ambitious to me. Story lost.

    Grreen sky is off for me. Crop off the right. Too dark and distracting to the action. Play up the diagonals in the tree slope with a tight crop. The left border has a funny building - clone it off. The other lowerstructures are also out of place.

    Composition on the extreme left bottom figure is a bit unclear. Centre figures are fine.

    The cross ball is not necessary to me. Any meaning for it to be there?

    Overall - KISS is better. Keep it simple and shapely. Less figures.

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    Default Re: Please comment on composition

    Quote Originally Posted by tOGGY
    Too much and too ambitious to me. Story lost.

    Grreen sky is off for me. Crop off the right. Too dark and distracting to the action. Play up the diagonals in the tree slope with a tight crop. The left border has a funny building - clone it off. The other lowerstructures are also out of place.

    Composition on the extreme left bottom figure is a bit unclear. Centre figures are fine.

    The cross ball is not necessary to me. Any meaning for it to be there?

    Overall - KISS is better. Keep it simple and shapely. Less figures.
    actually this shot is taken of heeren HMV...
    it was an aerial display of life sized cupboard figurines kicking a ball.

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    Default Re: Please comment on composition

    maybe a different angle. then you might be able to remove the side of the building (left) and the glass (bottom) left which just takes viewers attention away.

    also, if you notice carefully, there a diagonal line across the picture, separating green and red and this seems rather weird

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    Default Re: Please comment on composition

    Quote Originally Posted by spartacus.ret
    maybe a different angle. then you might be able to remove the side of the building (left) and the glass (bottom) left which just takes viewers attention away.

    also, if you notice carefully, there a diagonal line across the picture, separating green and red and this seems rather weird
    yup, thanks for the critique

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