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    Red face Pls help to critique

    Hi guys...can you help to give feedback on how to improve these pic?

    there are 4 pics. i am suppose to capture some life or some objects in campus

    new to all this...

    just bought my camera and hooked on it liao...thanks for your comments

    http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/7818/pic19tq.jpg
    http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3591/dance38qf.jpg
    http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6193/dance24kv.jpg
    http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6220/dance12cu.jpg
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    I don't see anything. Broken links?

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    saw the picture. Colours quite vibrant. I would have prefered a close-up of the girl's face though. Try a close-up on the face. it would look different.

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    yep nice background colours, good bokeh, but i think you should have metered off her white blouse...her forehead the white reflection abit overexposed..

    Douglas

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    hey douglas
    thanks!

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    harlow...blive...thanks!

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    Frankly speaking, what are your pics trying to tell?

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    hi Spectrum

    i am suppose to take some pic to depict some fun/vibrant life in campus

    totally new to taking pics le

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    Quote Originally Posted by ckgoh
    hey douglas
    thanks!
    no porburm. u ask for comment, we give!


    Douglas

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    good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.

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    Quote Originally Posted by espion
    good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.
    thanks for yr comments - just trying out with my new hobby. which is the better pic out of the 4?

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    still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.

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    the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?
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    Default Re: Pls help to critique

    Quote Originally Posted by ptwong
    the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?
    hi ptwong...thanks so much...still learning lor

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    Quote Originally Posted by espion
    still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.
    hihi dun know why cant open le...and thanks for the comment...trying to play with my camera more often...

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