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    Default Moving Souls...

    I somehow feel there is a better and more apt title for this photo. But for the time being, Moving Souls it will be...

    Comments appreciated.


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    Default Re: Moving Souls...

    nice shot too..
    but that big and bright font in the bottom left is killing your image.
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    find the black smear in top left quadrant distracting.

    also find the train wavy, not that it shld not be, but the waves kinda irregular, and again unsettling.

    maybe use a longer exposure so all these features are 'smoothed' out - just an idea.

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    Default Re: Moving Souls...

    Font looks alright to me if u want to show yr title and it occupy lower left of the corner of the photo , but what i dont understand is yr title and yr photo dont match ... moving souls ? train + human ?

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