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    Default Dark Window (newbie shot for critique)

    Hi,
    critiques, advise, etc, pls feel free to shoot. I only newbie, please teach me. Thanks.


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    Default Re: Dark Window (newbie shot for critique)

    there is a black rectangle at the bottom,
    is this part of the scene?

    If it is, you might want to consider a tighter crop and crop it away
    it does nothing for the image

    the horizontal bar of the lamp post is disturbing the window, so you might want to choose a different pov.

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    Default Re: Dark Window (newbie shot for critique)

    the lamp is blocking the window. more composition can be gotten from the window.

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    Default Re: Dark Window (newbie shot for critique)

    Thanks for the comments. Will relook at how to compose this shot again.

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