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    Default Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)



    well picture taken when i just got my D70 and playing around wif the cam. Please give your comments so that i can improve thanks

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    Default Re: Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)

    judging from ur title, i believe ur subject on interest in the kid on the left with his hand sticking into the hole.. in that case, perhaps u want to move ur frame more to the left? the kid to the right seems to be vying for attention and the kid on the left is cropped a little too close to me..

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    Default Re: Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Arcanic~
    judging from ur title, i believe ur subject on interest in the kid on the left with his hand sticking into the hole.. in that case, perhaps u want to move ur frame more to the left? the kid to the right seems to be vying for attention and the kid on the left is cropped a little too close to me..
    Pro , I got the same thought too .
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    Default Re: Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)

    I'm alright with the overall, just that the way you title it is really misleading. Instead of changing the picture as everybody suggested, try out another caption.

    (Let's try one for example for this picture... 'Curiosity'. Is it more appealing now?)

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    Default Re: Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)

    eh not really good at giving name to the pic

    how bout the photo any comments on it?

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    Default Re: Wats in there?? (noob posting first time)

    well... the ur subject is underexposed...

    as for ur framing, it doesn really work for me though, a bit neither here nor there feel.. i would suggest going wider more.

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