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    Hi guys,

    Something from the zoo taken a while back..



    There seems to be a playful, relaxed feel to the subject due to the orientation. In terms of composition, I was tempted to take it off centre, but decided that the focal point could work with a "in your face" approach due to the relatively clean background.

    Comments/critique be it good or bad are appreciated.

    Thanks!

    Cheers,

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    nice capture.

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    The focus is off centre, to me the subject of this composition is the eyes, and it is placed off centre which works for me, overall a good capture of a good moment but I feel that a slightly tighter crop would make this composition better.

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    i like this pic... can see the monkey grinning and asking the viewer to "look here"..

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    Default Re: Look here

    Thanks guys for the comments.

    Ortega, I was considering a tighter crop, but that resulted in loosing the foreground which gives a clue the orientation of the monkey. Maybe I give it another go and see how it turns out.

    Cheers,

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